Where does childhood
Where does childhood
Photo by Sakovich Dmitriy, photographer. Country life: childhood, sunset, bike. FUJIFILM FinePix S5Pro, published 22.08.2012.
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Comments 16
Sakovich Dmitriy
22.08.2012 07:03
Maybe this will become a genre now?
R.Bakson
R.Bakson 142.02
22.08.2012 07:14
View crop maybe like this?
Sakovich Dmitriy
22.08.2012 07:25
R.Bakson, Indeed, in this version the emphasis is on the beginning of the “path”, the bike looks more powerful - Thanks for the tip!
Slobodan Miladinović
22.08.2012 07:46
Nice photo.
Sakovich Dmitriy
22.08.2012 08:58
Slobodan Miladinović, Thanks for your attention!
Slobodan Miladinović, Evgeniy (EV6795), Sergey48 Thanks for the recommendations!
Serg Dav.
Serg Dav. 114.90
22.08.2012 12:51
I don't think the author's framing is bad, but the bike shouldn't have been centered in the frame. By moving it to the edge, the central composition could have been lost... IMHO.
Sakovich Dmitriy
22.08.2012 13:13
Serg Dav., Thanks for your attention, I can say for myself that I couldn't bring myself to remove the space and the three roads in the background (in the books I read that there should be 1 or 3 - although maybe this is a rule for PP and the main characters, and for ZP this rule cannot be extended much), but I repeat, I kept three roads as an additional association (the transition from one road of "childhood" to many - in this case, three)
Nadezhda Pahomova
22.08.2012 14:14
Naturally.
I liked the work!
Sakovich Dmitriy
22.08.2012 14:25
Pakhomova Nadin, Thanks for your attention! It's doubly nice to hear from a landscape artist
Ignat Safronov
22.08.2012 14:31
Maybe so?
R.Bakson, Yeah. And you shouldn't have put the salary in the blurry zone.
Ilona Kiriokatis
28.08.2012 10:09
Danny Vangenechten
13.09.2012 09:41
Wonderful picture, great title!
Aleksandr Zelenskiy
08.03.2016 19:05
Interesting plot.
Sakovich Dmitriy
23.06.2016 13:37
Alexander Zelensky, thank you for your attention.
Mihail 57 Mir
Mihail 57 Mir 197.61
08.08.2017 09:22
In my opinion, the emphasis is a bit weak... Either closer to the bicycle, to emphasize its size, or, what's much stronger, add the figure of a boy,
thoughtfully looking into the distance... But these are just my fantasies.
Sakovich Dmitriy
11.09.2017 07:58
Mikhail 57 World, I appreciate your opinion (thanks, Mikhail). Initially, I didn't have the boy pensively looking into the distance at hand ☺. Thanks to the criticism, I formed the basis of this shot later, but I should have taken it before, then there would have been fewer mistakes – the blurriness of the PP and ZP, the central location – to reflect the transition from childhood, the roads to the PP and ZP should have been the focus, and the bicycle an associative detail of childhood. It turns out that I only used 30% of the potential impact on the main idea of the photo. Alas, I admit.
Sakovich Dmitriy
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FUJIFILM FinePix S5Pro 21.08.2012 07:511/1800 secISO400
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