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Photo by Olga Dan, photographer. Children, infants: reportage, olga, dan. NIKON D7000, published 20.07.2016.
Comments 24
Viktor Buhrov
Viktor Buhrov 174.83
20.07.2016 08:43
Speaking of the photo as a whole, the mood of the story is somewhat "off" from the event in question, the composition is excellent, the quality of the photography is excellent. But with such a complex lighting design, very professional technical refinement is required to make the photograph expressive... /Please forgive me, Olya, for such an analysis; I don't see myself contributing to the photo-sharing any other way./
Alloxa (Psigrafija)
20.07.2016 09:09
photo of porridge.
Olga Dan
Olga Dan 365.15
20.07.2016 09:13
If we talk about the photo as a whole, the mood in the story is somewhat "off" from the event in question, the composition is excellent!, the quality of the shooting is excellent! But with such a complex lighting pattern, very professional technical refinement is required for the photograph to become expressive... /Please forgive me, Olya, for such an analysis, I don’t see any other way for me to participate in photo-communication./
Viktor Bukhrov, Oh, Victor, what an apology...) I am grateful to you for the analysis!) I myself was dissatisfied with the result of the processing - I tried many different options - I wanted the girl to "stand out" Most of all, but this harsh light... I couldn't cope with it. I settled on this option - it seemed to be the most suitable, but I'll try to work on the photo some more. It was a moment of a few seconds (as it happens in a reportage), a moment later everything had changed and the girl was covered... Thank you!)
Olga Dan
Olga Dan 365.15
20.07.2016 09:14
photo porridge.
babka.ru, What are our times like...) this is just a report.
Alloxa (Psigrafija)
20.07.2016 09:40
Alexander Zelensky, as long as you're giving 10s and rivers of light to these kinds of photos, you'll never learn to take good pictures! Your subconscious, which controls the creative act, won't allow you to take a decent photo.
Do you even understand the connection?
Muna
Muna 350.09
20.07.2016 16:27
Excellent ;o))
Olga Dan
Olga Dan 365.15
20.07.2016 18:49
Excellent ;o))
Muna, Phew....) I'm so happy for this little girl, for this moment....) Thank you!) Although I see some flaws in the work - I'll try to tinker with the processing some more)
Muna
Muna 350.09
20.07.2016 19:38
Muna, Phew....) I'm so happy for this little girl, for this moment....) Thank you!) Although I see some flaws in the work, I'll try to tinker with the processing some more)
Olga Dan, Everything worked out, that's the most important thing, you're making excuses for nothing... You can always find flaws in yourself, for example, Repin tormented himself with doubts and endlessly rewrote his masterpieces, but we're just amateurs, and this moment can't be rewritten. You were able to see and capture it :photo, and the processing can be different. I like yours for its naturalness...
Olga Dan
Olga Dan 365.15
20.07.2016 19:45
Olga Dan, Everything worked out, that's the most important thing. You're making excuses for nothing... You can always find flaws in yourself. For example, Repin tormented himself with doubts and endlessly rewrote his masterpieces, but we're just amateurs, and that moment can't be rewritten. You were able to see and capture it, and editing can be different. I like yours for its naturalness...
Muna, )That's our lot—to doubt and search...) There's no such thing in creativity without it... And you're right—the frame is clean, not even cropped, in the reportage I try to keep everything as it was. Thanks for your attention to the work)
Alloxa (Psigrafija)
20.07.2016 20:39
Everything worked out, that's the most important thing...
Muna, if a granny asks you to explain schematically her "everything worked out," you won't spend very long trying to figure out what exactly worked out???

And the granny will show you where you went wrong... Okay!?
Yuri Shep
Yuri Shep 90.86
20.07.2016 21:29
great
Muna
Muna 350.09
20.07.2016 21:31


Muna, if a granny asks you to explain schematically how "everything worked out," won't you spend too long trying to figure out exactly what worked out???
And the granny will show you where you went wrong... Okay!?
babka.ru, The thing is, you're not a granny (there's nothing feminine about you), so I don't trust you. But I do have a lot of life experience, intuition, and upbringing, which I trust. I think I already have the right to my own opinion. Okay, I won't have any, but I can coexist with your opinion without arguing...
Alloxa (Psigrafija)
20.07.2016 22:36
babka.ru, The thing is, you're not a grandma (there's nothing feminine about you), so I don't trust you. But I do have a wealth of life experience, intuition, and upbringing, which I trust.
Muna, your intuition didn't fail you = yes, I'm not a grandma, I'm an old man. But the funniest thing is, that doesn't change the essence of the question!
You're misleading the author by STATING
Everything worked out, that's the most important thing, you're just making excuses...
That's why I'd like to know if you're competent to make such statements. We won't discuss purely subjective statements that lack theoretical justification in this case—your confident tone doesn't imply that. And that's correct, since the theory of visual perception is quite well studied.
So I suggest we return to the still-current question of how to construct a frame that will highlight your
most important
points and
Did everything work out?
??? You don't have to rush... your problem isn't meant for the mentally challenged.
Good luck, colleague.
Alloxa (Psigrafija)
21.07.2016 20:01
Muna, here you and I have not completed our fundamental dialogue! in case you forgot...
Muna
Muna 350.09
21.07.2016 21:12
Muna, we haven't finished our crucial dialogue here! In case you've forgotten...
babka.ru, My answer has already been given. There's no way to convince you otherwise, and there's no need... But I'd like to look at your valuable work to better understand you, if, of course, you're so inclined...
Alloxa (Psigrafija)
21.07.2016 21:27
Muna, we haven't finished our crucial dialogue here! In case you've forgotten...
babka.ru, My answer has already been given. There's no way to convince you otherwise, and that's not necessary... But I'd like to look at your worthwhile works to better understand you, if, of course, you're so inclined...
Muna, Well, now you and I know the value of your words – spam!

And spam certainly won't convince a granny.

From now on, please be more careful with words you can't back up... especially those containing honey.

All the best!
Muna
Muna 350.09
21.07.2016 21:30
Muna, we haven't finished our crucial dialogue here! In case you've forgotten...
babka.ru, My answer has already been given. I can't convince you otherwise, and that's not necessary... But I'd like to look at your valuable work to better understand you, if, of course, you're so inclined...
M u n a, Well, now you and I know the value of your words – spam!

And spam certainly won't convince a granny.

From now on, please be more careful with words you can't back up... especially those containing honey.

All the best!
babka.ru, And good luck to you too :o)))
Olga Dan
Olga Dan 365.15
21.07.2016 22:33
M u n a, well, now you and I know the value of your words - spam!
And of course, you can't convince a granny with spam.

From now on, please be more careful with words you can't back up... especially ones with honey in them.

All the best!
babka.ru, Why are you picking on Muna???) It's better to tell me, the author, EVERYTHING you want! I see and feel what you want! And I will listen attentively and maybe even heed your words and recommendations, since they are often truly useful. Just no moralizing or rudeness! I have a decent upbringing and I don't like that. And somehow it was more pleasant to talk to the Doctor than to some old woman...))) And to the point - in the photo!
Alloxa (Psigrafija)
21.07.2016 22:48
Olga Dan, I've already said everything I wanted to say about the "well-mannered" woman, about the photo.
Don't be so rude and preachy again if you want to learn something.
Olga Dan
Olga Dan 365.15
21.07.2016 23:01
Olga Dan, everything I wanted to say to a "well-mannered woman" has already been said about the photo.
Don't be so rude and preachy again if you want to learn something.
babka.ru, It was clear from the start that I have nothing to say to you from the photo except one word!) And remember—I never force myself on anyone!!! Remember, as Bulgakov said: "They'll come themselves and give everything themselves!") You came to my village, not I to you....)
Muna
Muna 350.09
21.07.2016 23:23
Olya, don't worry about me, it's my fault that I was sincere with the provocateur, but I couldn't resist, and that's what happened... the photo has nothing to do with it :o))
Alloxa (Psigrafija)
21.07.2016 23:45
Olya, don't worry about me. My fault is that I was sincere with the provocateur, but I couldn't resist, and that's what happened... the photo has nothing to do with it :o))
Muna, you were the one who provoked her, my dear, because you couldn't substantiate your words!!!
I was counting on your detailed arguments, because you spoke as if you knew the subject thoroughly, but it turned out to be just a troll provocation.

In short, you'll have to answer for the unfounded "provocateur" against the old woman according to local laws.
Olga Dan
Olga Dan 365.15
22.07.2016 08:20
Olya, don't worry about me, it's my fault I was sincere with the provocateur, but I couldn't resist, and that's what happened... the photo has nothing to do with it :o))
Muna, )Have a happy weekend!)
Muna
Muna 350.09
22.07.2016 08:51
Muna, )Happy weekend!
Olga Dan, Likewise ;o)
Olga Dan
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NIKON D7000 09.05.2016 11:461/250 secF/8.055 mmISO20055.0-300.0 mm f/4.5-5.6
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