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Photo by Pavel Nagin, photographer. Abstract photography. Canon PowerShot S5 IS, published 30.11.2012.
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Pavel Nagin
Pavel Nagin 240.13
30.11.2012 18:22
I ask for criticism
PAVELKO VLADIMIR
PAVELKO VLADIMIR 309.65
30.11.2012 19:32
As an option View crop
But in general, for these kinds of rollers, I'd like a more detailed texture (oblique light)
Pavel Nagin
Pavel Nagin 240.13
30.11.2012 20:27
As an option
But in general, for these rollers, I'd like a more detailed texture (oblique light)
PAVELKO VLADIMIR, Thank you! I agree.
Jakov Trembovolskiy
Jakov Trembovolskiy 562.85
30.11.2012 21:35
Gut. I would make it a little darker.
Pavel Nagin
Pavel Nagin 240.13
30.11.2012 21:50
Gut. I'd make it a little darker.
Yakov Trembovolsky, Thank you! Glad you visited
Marina Glebova
Marina Glebova 171.48
30.11.2012 21:58
I can't figure it out - I see a blue picture in the preview, but when I open it, it turns bright turquoise. What is it really like? Is it just me? Maybe my computer is acting up?
Marina Glebova
Marina Glebova 171.48
30.11.2012 22:02
It's all clear, Opera is acting up today, I opened it in another browser - everything is fine
Qwerty
Qwerty 62.49
30.11.2012 23:43
Some brightness is irritating to the eyes. The brightness is misleading.
Reggi 0.00
01.12.2012 00:26
There's no need to crop anything. Everything is cropped. It could use a little more saturation. I like the work.
Pavel Nagin
Pavel Nagin 240.13
01.12.2012 16:21
The brightness is so harsh on the eyes. The brightness is misleading.
Ronin, I agree. I increased the contrast; the colors needed to be toned down a bit. Thanks for the feedback!
Pavel Nagin
Pavel Nagin 240.13
01.12.2012 16:21
Reggi, Thank you!
Pavel Nagin
Pavel Nagin 240.13
01.12.2012 16:22
It's all clear, Opera is acting up today. I opened it in another browser and everything is fine.
Marina Glebova, Thanks!
Helga In The Smoke
Helga In The Smoke 20.19
01.12.2012 18:44
Cool...at least I found something interesting...otherwise it's boring all around)))
Pavel Nagin
Pavel Nagin 240.13
01.12.2012 20:09
Крутяк...хоть что-то интересное нашла...а то кругом скукатища)))
FaRЭLiVna, Спасибо !!!
Sergei Dzhonovich
Sergei Dzhonovich 89.95
02.12.2012 12:59
Cool
Pavel Nagin
Pavel Nagin 240.13
02.12.2012 18:11
Cool
Sergey Dzhonovich, Thanks!!! But I don't like it anymore, I reshot another one, I'll upload it now
Impressor 11.52
04.12.2012 07:07
Framed plumbing fixtures for turquoise lovers. The chalkboard on the windowsill is out of place.
Pavel Nagin
Pavel Nagin 240.13
04.12.2012 16:28
Plumbing fixtures in a frame for turquoise lovers. The board on the windowsill is out of place.
Impressor, And you should abstract yourself from the essence of the objects; the board doesn't really get in the way. Thanks for your opinion!
Pavel Nagin
Pavel Nagin
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Canon PowerShot S5 IS 30.11.2012 18:22 29.11.2012 23:511/5 secF/2.76 mmISO400
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