Partenit Bay
Partenit Bay
Photo by ash, photographer. Landscape panorama: crimea, sea, cape. NIKON D5000, published 18.07.2012.
Comments 24
Aira
Aira 80.50
18.07.2012 07:49
Like it
Kanstantsin Markevich
18.07.2012 08:06
...great work...
Shevchenko Taras
18.07.2012 10:23
My beloved Crimea, although it's completely filthy, pardon the expression, but unfortunately that's how it is. The author even has a little bottle in the foreground it needed cleaning, and the artificial concrete blocks with rings don't improve the picture either; they could have been replaced with stones.
ash
ashPRO 192.34
18.07.2012 10:27
Shevchenko Taras, yeah, cover it with sand, plant palm trees...
Shevchenko Taras
18.07.2012 10:32
Shevchenko Taras, yeah, cover it with sand, plant some palm trees...
ash, Still, the eggplant hurts the eye Are you still traveling around Crimea?
ash
ashPRO 192.34
18.07.2012 10:47
Shevchenko Taras, it's been a month since I returned
Wwwarjag (Vitaliy Volosevich)
18.07.2012 11:09
It turned out well.
Vasiliy Jakushev
18.07.2012 13:01
Fine!
Jakov Trembovolskiy
18.07.2012 13:28
There's too much going on: my eye can't hold the image and it doesn't glide over it. )) There's a fixation, maybe for ecologists :)).

Here's an independent work: View crop
ash
ashPRO 192.34
18.07.2012 13:44
Yakov Trembovolsky, thank you. Something similar was said elsewhere. Personally, my "view wanders from the cliff down the pebbles to the right edge, transitioning to the upper shoreline and returning along it or the clouds (adds dynamics) to the cliff. The right edge is undecided; it would have been worthwhile to close the shoreline, but the view there wasn't great." But this is more my personal bias. An outside perspective is interesting.
Jakov Trembovolskiy
18.07.2012 14:37
ash,

It's clear that if there are many objects in the foreground and background, then a viewing trajectory will be found.

But we're talking about the balance of objects in the frame, or the correct imbalance, if we're talking about an artistic image.

If it's a document, just a fact, that's a different matter.

In Japan, I was amazed by how precisely, subtly, and thoughtfully they arranged stones in space ("rock gardens").

It's the same with a photographer: he can't remove stones from the frame (unless he's a radical photographer), but when he shoots and frames, it's always his choice.
ash
ashPRO 192.34
18.07.2012 14:41
Yakov Trembovolsky, this is part of the Lambada Chaos, is it worth putting this chaos in order?
Jakov Trembovolskiy
18.07.2012 14:50
ash, no, of course not, and I wrote about imbalance (chaos) too, but angles can be different, direct and indirect, objective and subjective,
depth of field, sharpness/blur, specific framing:

You know this better than me.

I would also crop the right side with this option: View crop

This is an endless conversation. )))
ash
ashPRO 192.34
18.07.2012 14:58
Yakov Trembovolsky, thank you
riabina
riabina 109.24
18.07.2012 15:47
...and much better technically...
ash
ashPRO 192.34
18.07.2012 17:17
no one ever saw it View crop
Aleksander Pasyura
18.07.2012 19:26
Great-beautiful!
18.07.2012 21:23
I would still make it a little softer View crop
18.07.2012 21:25
nobody ever saw it
ash, but you could have highlighted that spot a little just a little
ash
ashPRO 192.34
18.07.2012 21:48
I'd still do it a little softer
Sergey Tigarev, at this distance View crop you can count the needles on the trees, but here it's almost PP.
And you could highlight this spot a little
Sergey Tigarev, it's already highlighted, any further is too much
Valeriy Grigorenko
19.07.2012 08:21
Lots of talk... The shot is good, I like it as is...
19.07.2012 13:14
The concrete and ironwork on the p.p. somewhat detract from the elegiac mood, but it's beautifully shot - textured, three-dimensional, with a vibrant sky.
Lipton 27.54
19.07.2012 15:09
Aleksei Sokolov
20.07.2012 10:00
Yes, I agree 200% about the filth, the views are nice. But when you remember that next to it there is practically a garbage dump... Although there are places that are not so run-down.
ash
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