A thoughtful, attractive Chinese woman is the only plus. ))) Part of the second passenger's face (specifically, her open eye) is distracting. It creates two focal points. I'd rather look at the main character's face, not the eye sticking out from the edge of the photo. View crop
Igor Kozlov (adam_k), I decided to leave it in for two reasons: to create a second diagonal, a "black" crossover with the "white" diagonal, and also because of the gaze—looking but not seeing, more immersed in itself, in its own thoughts, thoughts, and feelings... sacrificing the distraction it provides. That's why there's only half of the face, not the whole thing... Maybe I was wrong to leave it in... perhaps it could have been emphasized differently... Thanks for the criticism!
Thanks for the criticism!